Homicidal Liu
It all started one night, the murderer Jeffrey Woods murdered his parents and his beloved brother Liu Woods; Jeff stopped being the boy who was kind and became a soulless monster that had a pure desire to kill. But Seriously how did his brother Liu survive after receiving multiple cuts and stab wounds all over his abdomen?
Liu survived the attack by his brother, barely, His heart felt like bursting from the effort. but Liu continued with the strength from his desperation to live, and go to Jeff, then everything went black and he fainted.
It took a long time for Liu to wake up, he was in a fairly lit room, full of tubes and medicine, he could not speak, could not eat, Liu was fed through a tube, breathing through an artificial lung, he could barely make out who he was; just listening to a nurse talking to a doctor, She said "This patient may not survive, he needs many transplants, his left lung collapsed, his heart is very delicate and kidneys are failing, it is almost impossible for him to survive." Those words, they were the proof that Liu had survived what had happened.
Then came the day when the transplants would be needed. Liu could not talk yet and was quite sedated, he could not express his joy at that time, so he saved it for when he recovered. The nurse that came in said "Hi, I'm Susan, I wish you the best of luck, you're very strong, barely survived to this attempted murder, I personally wanted to take care of you, because I admire your strength, I wish you well when you leave the hospital." She kissed his cheek and blushed, Liu could not deny she was a very beautiful girl, but he did not know if he would survive this.
It was time, the time which fate would decide whether Liu would live or die. The doctor told him that a young strong boy who survived this long, was most likely to survive, they put the mask on and Liu slept, but would he feel what they did to him? At that moment, Liu then felt a cold blade pierce him in the side of the heart, the first cut was the most painful, then something opened his skin, the pain was more intense with each passing second, each cut was more painful than before, but, most painful was when they started cutting his heart and get it out of his body, that moment was just the beginning of Liu’s torture, hours of excruciating pain, every cut, every part of Liu that replaced, each suture, all the pain through his body destroyed what little sanity he had left, until it shattered.
Liu spent days in that bed unable to move, unable to speak, just listening to the voice of the nurse, Susan, she was with him, day and night, talking to him, telling him to resist, she wanted Liu alive, Liu wanted to know the truth and he hoped he could talk to Susan and she could hear his voice. A week passed and she came more often, came and sang, and read, but one day before Liu could move his body Susan said "I want you to wake up." She kissed him after finishing that sentence and Liu started to feel his body, and managed to open his eyes and saw her, crying with joy to see that he was awake, He then said, "Hi Susan, I'm Liu Woods." She was astonished, and said, "Really your ...your the brother of Jeff Woods? He was here a while, he was very ill, I found out he went crazy and killed his family, How is it that you survived Liu? I also found out that three days ago he kidnapped a girl and burned her alive with bleach and gasoline, then escaped from there and has not been seen, but in the house, or what remains of it, we have not found more than two bodies, they say that she survived but did not know what happened to the body's, In the room where his brother slept, or where you were sleeping, they found written in blood on the wall "go to sleep" and the words "smile" on the bathroom mirror, I very much regret the death of your parents, seriously, and could not imagine that you would ever want to return to that place, "You want to sleep over in my house for a while? Well, when you get out of recovery, I live alone since my parents died in a car accident, so I have a spare room. "
Liu accepted the offer from Susan, and said "When I leave here, I want to take you to dinner, wherever you want, alone, I need one day to accompany me to my old home to get my clothes, but I do not think they are still there." She accepted slightly fearful. The following day she visited Liu, they laughed together, Liu and Susan were very close, almost like they were dating, so after a while Liu asked her to be his girlfriend, she said " Liu, I’ve always wanted to be your girlfriend, I was going to ask but I did not know how. " Liu approached her and kissed her. He was so happy, things were getting better for him, he finally had a person who would be his new family.
Liu left the hospital, it was his first day out, Susan welcomed him with open arms. She told him where his clothes were at in Liu’s new home, Susan then said "Yes, but you have to bring something to protect us in case your brother is still hanging around. " Liu replied " Okay, a couple of butcher knives, a syringe, a little soothing, also a little emergency kit in case we need suturing, you or me, if a glass can cause a wound that will need stitches, a gallon of water and two glasses, for if we get thirsty. "
They went to Liu’s old house and picked everything he needed, plus a bag to carry his stuff. Back in Liu’s old home, Susan gripped his arm, Liu said "Do not be afraid, everything will be fine." He kissed her to calm her down, he opened the door a little, they then walked in and saw that the walls of Liu’s house were full of blood, the blood of his parents, they found in the kitchen a gallon of gasoline, an empty bleach bottle and some matches, still touring the house, they looked into the bathroom and saw the mirror with the word " Smile "written in blood, the sink and floor also covered in blood, his whole house was just full of blood. They walked to the next door that was the fourth and was his parents, they found the sheets stained with blood. They then entered the most disturbing place of his house: Liu’s room. The phrase "go to sleep" was written in blood on the wall, as Susan said. Liu looked in his closet and got his belongings, his laptop, his mp3, his phone and his clothes, but only what was not full of blood. Liu remembered the disturbing side of Jeff seeing those eyes full of madness and holding a bloody knife in his hand saying "Shhh, just go to sleep." That memory was what caused what little sanity Liu had left to disappear, He told Susan to give him the backpack where they had his things, He then went to the bathroom, took the knife and said "Jeff ... I'll see you in hell."
After the sentence, Liu speaked to Susan and kissed her, he said "Goodbye my love, but I want to find Jeff and get back at what he made me, and get revenge for killing my parents and almost killing me, I love you Susan, I'm sorry for this. " Then he would stab her, but no, he did not, he would not become Jeff, She said "Okay, Liu, I love you, and I know that being so close to death can affect people, let's go home." They kiss, ordered a taxi and went home, after they got home Liu went to bathe.
While Liu bathed, he remembered every moment spent with his family, Mom, Dad, his childhood with Jeff, the pranks they did, everything they had done together, the joy of having his family around, he then began to mourn, but the sound of falling water drowned his sobs, so it did not matter. The first night was somewhat traumatic for Liu. In his nightmares he could see Jeff as it was before the accident, before being brutally murdered by the new Jeff, then he turned to look at Liu and said "Liu, why did you not go to sleep like I asked you?" Liu then woke up with a terrible fright Susan ran to his room, she said, "What happened Liu? Are you okay? "Liu replied" Yes ... it was just a nightmare, do not worry. "
The next day, upon awakening, Liu smelt a scent that he has long not enjoyed, it was the smell of hot-cakes freshly made, he went to the dining room and there was Susan, preparing breakfast, as Mom did, she said good morning go Liu , They sat down and started eating, how long had it been since he did not eaten hot-cakes made with love ?, he didn’t know, but the taste ... it was so nice, he felt loved again, but happiness does not last long, Liu was going crazy, every passing day, Susan reminded him more of his Mom, so he took a kitchen knife, and ran to her room, she was ready to go out with him on a date, she looked so beautiful, he was not able to kill her, not with knowing how much he loved her, not with having feeling love for the last time in his life ... he loved her, but he was getting crazier every day, every time it cost him more to restrain from sticking a knife in her heart, He did not want to kill her, but had no choice, or so he thought.
Already leaving the theater, they walked home, he said "I love you Susan, but there's something inside me that I ... it’s killing me and I do not know if I can take it anymore, I want you to know that I love you. "After the phrase, A man came out of an alley and took the bag Susan had but not without wounding her, Liu was angry, he wanted to kill him for hurting Susan, he chased him with the knife he had saved in his jacket pocket, he dragged him into the alley where he stole the bag from his beloved Susan, Liu made the man kneel in front of her and made him apologize, Liu wanted to take his life, but before he did he turned to Susan and said "Run, I do not want you to see this, I love you Susan, and you do not want to see this." Susan ran as far as she could, when he knew it was okay and Susan was gone, he told the guy " I cannot forgive you for hurting Susan, she is good, so pure, hurting someone like her is a very serious crime, so then, I'll take your life, and only then you will pay for hurting her. "
Liu Raised his knife and started stabbing the man repeatedly, he could only see suffering in the eyes of the man, but still kept stabbing him until he died of multiple stab wounds, Liu wiped the blood off on his leather jacket, which was a bit stained, luckily only had some spots, so it was easy to hide the fact that he had cornered the thief, he left the alley and met Susan in the corner cafe sipping espresso.
Susan was fine, the manager had bandaged her wound, Liu thanked him, Liu carried Susan home carefully, he took her to her room and layed her down on the bed, he said "Susan, I did not want this to happen to you, so for now on, I will not let anyone hurt you, starting today, you'll never be afraid, nobody will hurt, I swear. " Liu kissed her and went to take a shower, he realized he could not kill her, she was all he had in this world, she was the only person he loved, but he enjoyed killing that guy, but he could not kill anyone while he was with Susan, Liu decided to just kill people that hurt the innocent and people who did evil to people that he minded, and above all, he would kill anyone who tried to hurt Susan.
Days passed, more and more people were killed, but it was annoying having pants full of blood, so he bought leather pants then killing was less annoying, he got jackets and shoes, both leather, which he could easily clean with soap and water.
Killing became an increasingly boring habit again, killing with simple stabbing was very repetitive, so Liu was using modes more twisted each time, some he burned alive with gasoline, others operated without anesthesia, others were forced to eat his own guts, others cut into pieces and threw them to stray dogs, but never killed any innocent criminals and thugs killed only does that made him a hero, right? he was making criminals suffer in the most horrible ways, every day used most horrible forms and twisted way to kill, came home, cleaned his clothes from the blood of criminals and spent quality time with Susan, until one day, they were going to have dinner, Liu had a job as a cook in a restaurant, earning well, but instead he took her to a beautiful place, in the light of the candles, Liu said "Susan, we've been together for almost a year, you're the love of my life, I do not know how I could live without you, I want to propose something. "Liu knelt down and remove a ring from his bag" Will you marry me? " Susan moved, and with tears in her eyes said" Yes Liu, I will marry you. " They left the restaurant, Liu had not been so happy in his life, but a man appeared with a gun and shot Susan.
Liu was filled with anger and hatred, but he could not leave Susan alone there, bleeding, dying, he ran and get to the nearest hospital, the doctors told Liu "This is a very delicate procedure, Susan may not wake up, we expect the worst." Liu went to get the man who shot Susan, he’ll never forget the man’s face, Liu spent hours walking the streets until he found him, he beat him nearly senseless, and said, " you will give me your life bastard, because of you my Susan is at the brink of death, and you will pay with your life. "He died when Liu finished the sentence.
Liu arrived at the hospital, the doctor said that Susan had awakened, and to go talk to her, and he did. Now in Susan's room, she saw him and said "Liu? Is that you? I'm glad you came, I hope to resist as you had resisted what happened to you, I love you Liu, I do not want to die, but if I do I don’t want you to kill yourself, I love you too much to die for me, I know what you did, I know you kill criminals, and although not a very noble, mission you have, do not stop doing what you do Liu. "
He spent an hour in which they talked, in which he said all he had to say, he did not want to lose it, he did not want to lose the only person left for him in this world. The doctor came in and said "We need to operate Mrs. Woods will recover." She was taken to the operating room, where it lasted for three hours that seemed eternal, Liu wanted to gouge his eyes out of despair, but hope that Susan survived was why Liu was still standing. After the operation, the doctor who took care of everything said "The operation was a success, she is stable, in the morning she will wake and after two weeks she may leave the hospital." Those words touched Liu so much, he felt so calm knowing that Susan would be fine.
Liu was in his room all day waiting for Susan to wake, she then woke up and said "Who are you and where my parents are?" Those words filled Liu with sadness, Susan had forgotten him, but he had to do something to remind her when she recovered, he took her to the hospital where they met, she said "Is that you, Liu? you’ve changed. "She began to remember, he took her to his old house, and she remembered that they were there, he kept taking Susan to all the significant places they were at during the week, until they got to the restaurant that Liu had proposed at, she remembered everything, hugged him and said "Liu, now I remember everything, thanks for being with me until I regained my memory." Then Liu said, "You did the same for me, I owe you that much Susan." He kissed her, but when they parted, Susan began to convulse, it scared him a lot and he took her to the hospital.
Liu would not leave her alone when she needed him, he stayed there waiting for news from the doctor, and the doctor said "I'm sorry sir, but your girlfriend is dead." That phrase filled Liu with sadness and hatred, he took the doctor by the neck and threw him across the room, there was no reason to hold back, he began to kill everyone in the hospital, men, women, children and sick, he killed them all, he could not bear them to live and his Susan not to, she could not die and he would not let that happened, but it was inevitable, Liu’s clothes were full of blood of the innocents, his hands were drenched in blood and his eyes had changed, so he decided to do something, he went for a knife and started cutting a heart into his chest, the initials of Susan and her time of death, their anniversary and the date when they met, then Liu went for a needle and thread and he sewed the edges of his lips into a smile for anyone to see and suffer inside. When he finished, Liu went home, grabbed his leather clothes and things that he used to kill, and left, never to return, now, Liu lives by killing all those who are happy, but when people die, they will not see it, but killing consoles Liu, if you see him, run and do not show your happiness, for if you do you will die in a very ruthless and twisted way, so twisted you won’t be able to tell your body from what it was like before meeting him.
~Homicidal Liu Survivor of Jeff The Killer
Hush,Liu. Just go to sleep.
ReplyDeleteR u real
DeleteHuh-
Deleteummm-ifthat was jeff he would be killing everyone that uses this website
DeleteI'll be back for lui soon
ReplyDeleteNo 😠jeff
DeleteI don't know what to think about this.
ReplyDeletei feel bad for liu he lost the love of his life and it is sad because he never wanted to be like his brother.
ReplyDeleteHomicidal Liu is real a know all of the creepy pastas are
ReplyDeleteit took me a long time to read but i love it, i daily research creepypastas my favorite is Ticci Toby. I hope everybody likes this. Aside from that i feel bad for lui because in the fandom he has to live in the Slender Mansion with Jeff.
ReplyDeleteHow can it take long? I read it in 5 minutes. It's a sad story that makes me want to punch Jeff but, oh well. Nothing to be done now. I just hope he finds someone again. Like, her reincarnation of something.
DeleteIf you look up luis quote it actually says that he forgave Jeff
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ReplyDeleteWow this is A sad True storey ?
ReplyDeleteup ahead in one of the coments it says that all crepypastas are real so then yes maybe it is real
DeleteThe story telling is really bad but overall it was pretty good
ReplyDeletehi
ReplyDeletethis is just anime but for preteens that dont know how to use kissanime. i loved it.
ReplyDeletei loved it
ReplyDeletei loved it
ReplyDeletei thought that liu killed susan.... i'm not even sure if this is the actual origin or not...
ReplyDeletei don't think this is the actual origin.... from what i heard he killed susan for calling his brother a monster... this really confuses me...
ReplyDeleteno he wouldnt of killed her for saying that,liu doesnt wanna be like jeff
Deleteactually its true but didnt he meet up with jeff
ReplyDeleteyes, but it oviusly doesnt say his whole childhood
DeleteWow I feel bad for liu
ReplyDeleteliu doesnt need this life. he deserves to be with his true love and have a happy and good life..
ReplyDeletestupid jeff, no offence for him and the fans but it is jeffs fault if he didnt go all insane on the people all those innocent people and his family those people would be living a happy life,and his brother wouldnt hate him and liu would be with susan
You're right but these are only fictional characters and stories if they weren't made then they wouldn't be the stories that they are today
Deletefor some reason this gives me light yagami energy with the killing of the criminals
ReplyDeleteI am going to die
ReplyDeletel love Nina the killer and jane the killer and jeef the kuller
ReplyDeleteAh yes, jeef the kuller
DeleteWTF STOP IT'S NOT TRUE THAT HE HAD A LOVER AND IN THAT TIME. LIU WAS ONLY 17 IDK WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU THE TRUTH IS HE WOKE UP ON THE HOSPITAL YES HE SAW A NURSE BUT HE DID NOT FALL IN LOVE TO HER. AND THE NURSE CALL JEFF MONSTER OR BASTARD UNTIL LIU CHANGE CLOTHES LEAVE THE HOSPITAL AND STARTED KILLING THAT WAS THE TRUE STORY OF HOMICIDAL LIU
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